I'm so excited today because I get to share a little wisdom with the rest of you from one of my newest friends, Sandra Valente. I’m re-blogging this today
because I think Sandra is so awesome and shares so many great words of wisdom
for writers that need to be seen! I met Sandra on Emma Meade’s blog, where she did a Q&A about
blogging and her interaction with writers. I found her post so insightful and
refreshing, I’m linking it here in case you want to take a look. Emma Meade's post. Thanks so much for letting me re-post your amazing tips, Sandra and for being so honest! It really is helpful, and I hope other writers will find this post and gain a bit of wisdom :)
If you have questions or comments for Sandra, please speak up!
TIPS
FOR RELATIVELY NEW (AND NOT SO NEW) INDIE AUTHORS FROM A READER, NOT A WRITER
First, a little about me.
As I can’t call it an ‘author bio’, I’ll go with reader/blogger bio.
READER/BLOGGER BIO
Sandra lives in South Africa with her husband
of 22 years (they met when they were both two), son and two dogs. She has a
ferocious passion for reading and coffee, and is against women/child abuse and
animal cruelty. Sandra runs a book blog where she shares her passion for books.
She’s finally found an outlet, said blog, SSBookFanatics (although
the blog’s name will be changing soon) where she is able to share reviews,
interviews, promote Indie authors and their books including taking part in blog
tours and sharing guest posts when time allows. Running her blog puts her in
her element, but meeting a handful of authors who have become special friends
is the icing on the cake.
She
prides herself in not only being a mother and wife, but a teacher, hairdresser,
taxi driver, cook, psychologist, nurse, negotiator (the typical female role)
and also a bit ‘good’ crazy.
She
loves soppy movies and chick flicks. Family, friends, music and reading are all
food for her soul – including food! To prove her ‘good’ crazy she’s willing to
share the following photo whilst at a kitchen tea. The theme was ‘Alice in
Wonderland’, and all guests were tasked with making their own hats. Last
but not least, Sandra constantly changes hair colour: between blonde and
brunette – makes life that much more interesting.
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This post was originally done in two parts, but here
I've decided on an inclusive post.
Now,
I’m not an author but I am an avid reader – really a coffee drinking book
obsessed nut – who happens to be quite capable of finding her way around the
English language. This doesn’t make me all-knowing, and I’m not perfect either.
I do know that when I’m not sure about something, I ask. It is how I, we, all
(hopefully) learn.
Just
so you know, English isn’t my first language as I’m Portuguese, but I’ve lived
in South Africa since the age of ten and due to this obsession with reading – I
believe – has made me pay more attention to detail, or rather words and
spelling. By saying that I’m not an author simply means that I have not written
a book or published one… yet. In this day and age, anyone can write a book and
publish it in the blink of an eye. Technology is amazing, but then so are
institutions such as Amazon, Smashwords and so on who
provide outlets for those who either haven’t been fortunate enough to be picked
up by a publishing house, or for those who simply don’t want anything to do
with a publishing house. According to some, signing a deal only results in
signing away most of your rights/life. I know of one author who is and has done
extremely well, is self-published and adamantly refuses to sign over her hard
work for someone else to do with as they see fit. She also admits that this way
she can damn well write what she pleases.
I
am, however, the author of my blog posts. Sounds silly, I know, but I take them
very seriously. When I write/type up a review, it’s never, ever just something
I bash out on my keyboard. I’m not looking to have a review up every single day
for the sake of saying, ‘Look at how brilliant I am; I can do these in my
sleep.’ Nope, that’s definitely not me. I take my time, because I want to mean
what I say and quite honestly, I say what I mean – always in a kind way and
always as close to perfect as I am able to make them.
With
that said, I have edited and worked on two books (yes, for real); with a third
coming my way soon and I can’t wait! I have also beta/proofread for a NYT
bestselling author. Not shabby for someone who spends her life – most of it
anyway – reading. I can’t be that bad… I think. I guess this is why I pick up
on certain things and it seems to be an emerging pattern. It’s hard though, I
know. Eyes are deceiving little buggers, sneaky to boot and make you either
miss something that IS there, or read something (in other words, fill in words)
that are NOT there. It’s happened to me, still happens to me and I know it’s
happened to you. So, without further ado, here are some of my tips
regarding issues I pick up when reading, especially with self-published books.
I must mention at this point that there are loads of people who are ‘editors’
by profession and authors, or so they claim yet when I read their blog posts,
book blurbs and even excerpts, I am left slightly stunned. Again, nobody is
perfect, but please check your own work. There is nothing worse than being
interested in a book, visiting the author’s site – all excited mind you – and
what I read there is sometimes really bad, so bad it totally puts me off buying
their book. I’m not the only one who feels this way, trust me. It doesn’t
matter that you are only doing a blog post, be professional in all aspects of
social media. Also, bear in mind that I am not pointing a finger at anyone in
particular because I’ll have four pointing right back at me, but as I am a
staunch supporter of Indie authors, I always want to help where I can.
Something
interesting I’ve done on a few occasions was e-mail an author and shared with
them things that were either out of context, not consistent or incorrectly
spelt in their book. This may surprise you, but not once have I been told to
take a flying leap off a tall building. In one case, an author was shocked.
Why? Not one single person mentioned anything to her in this regard. Here too,
I was thanked. Of course, now that I’ve said I’ve had nothing but positive
responses back, I have gone and jinxed it and next time I do e-mail someone… I will be
told to take that flying leap off a tall building! That’s okay; I can take the
good with the bad. What pleases me, though, is that most authors are
appreciative which only shows me (the reader) that they do want to perfect
their books as much as possible, and are willing to go that extra mile not only
for themselves but for their readers. You can’t ask for more. Remember: much
haste, less speed. This will only result in disappointment and will affect book
sales.
I
will leave you with something to think about: I cannot tell you how many times
I have received a book review request where the e-mail from the author is so
badly written, I go back and read it again just in case I read it wrong the
first time around. You want to pique their interest, not put them off. Readers
who are impressed with your first communication – your e-mail – will want to
read your book. Although most will only accept genres they prefer, it could
very well be your chosen genre. It’s much the same as going for a job
interview. I doubt very much you’d walk into an office looking like you were
dragged through a bush backwards. Be friendly, I personally prefer the laid
back type of person, but everyone appreciates professionalism at the same time.
Before
you read what I have to say, please take into account that these are things I
constantly pick up in books, and it seems to be an emerging pattern.
●
First rule, always: please, please make sure that before your book is beta read, proofread or edited, you
decide which spelling you will be going with, and then make sure that your beta
reader, proofreader and/or editor knows this. So many people including (yes)
editors still don’t know the difference and mix both – I see it every time I
read a book. This is frustrating and more often than not when reviews are
written, readers will point out that a book was riddled with errors when in
fact they weren’t typos at all.
Some
examples of US and UK spelling:
US
|
UK
|
Dreamed
|
Dreamt
|
Spelled
|
Spelt
|
Learned
|
Learnt
|
Favor
|
Favour
|
Honor
|
Honour
|
Realize
|
Realise
|
Capitalize
|
Capitalise
|
Summarize
|
Summarise
|
You
will note that with the US spelling, the ‘u’ where anything ‘our’ is
concerned is dropped. Note the difference regarding the ‘s’ and ‘z’ as well.
With the UK spelling, most words
ending with a ‘t’ are spelt differently when using US spelling as they then end
with ‘ed’. Be careful, though, as you would not want to write ‘spent’ as
‘spended’. When in doubt, ask or look it up.
●
Make sure that the word you want to ‘write’ is the ‘right’ spelling of the
word. It’s important that you not only know the correct spelling, but that you
know the meaning of the word you want to convey to your readers. The below
mentioned words are tricky as they are pronounced the same. If you ever have
any doubts, it’s as simple as doing a Google search. If you still can’t find
it, ask someone, heck ask me and I will try and help. Incorrect use of these
words can totally stop the flow in your story, and done more than a few times
will put a reader off your book leaving them no choice but to put it aside… in
the DNF pile. You do not ever want this to happen.
Although
most of us know the difference, it’s still surprising that most of us don’t.
Remember, they really are so easy to miss.
Some examples are:
Their
|
There
|
Through
|
Threw
|
Sight
|
Site
|
Affect
|
Effect
|
Conscious
|
Conscience (This one got me recently, although I
know the difference!)
|
To
|
Too and two
|
Aid
|
Aide
|
Aisle
|
Isle
|
Ascent
|
Assent
|
Bare
|
Bear
|
●
Be consistent! How many times have I read a book where the girl has blue eyes,
only to reach a new chapter and she suddenly sports green eyes? Or, blonde and
short hair for half the book, to fiery red down to her waist the next? It
happens… a lot. I’ve just read a book recently where a particular sentence went
something like this: ‘I shoved him back, stared into his eyes but kept my head
on his chest.’ Do you see what’s wrong? She didn’t shove him with her ‘head’,
unless she’s a bull. She shoved him with her hands, yet she kept
her ‘head’ on his chest. A simple spell check is not going to do the
trick or fix this for you. Each word has to be read as a stand alone and then
the sentence as a whole, because seven times out of ten these types of mistakes
will be missed. There are so many sentences I could add here, but I’m sure you
get the gist of what I’m saying.
These
are the ‘top’ issues I constantly come across in books. I hope they are
helpful.
I
will end with one more tip, and this has nothing to do with what’s on the
inside, but rather what’s on the outside. Book covers. They are important. I said this recently when interviewed
by an author regarding book covers. ‘I love and am mad over book covers.’ This
is how I see it (just bear with me): pretend you own a store. You want to draw
people into your store hoping they part with a portion of their hard earned
money. What do potential customers see first? The outside of your store front.
If it’s not eye-catching or it’s shabby looking, they (including me) will walk
on by without giving it a second glance. In order to draw customers into your
store, you would need make sure it’s appealing, right? It’s exactly the same
with your book cover. Much like having beta readers or proofreaders working on
your story, why not ask a few people what they think of a particular cover/look
you are debating over? One author (quite cleverly) put two book covers
together, posted them on her blog and invited readers to comment. She asked
which one was better looking, and which was the more appropriate for her story.
Not only did they help her with this daunting task, but it was actually fun.
What better way to find out what your readers look for than by asking for their
input? There is no better way. Ultimately, it’s your choice but at least this
way you get a feel for your market.
After
this mouthful, I will say that there have been times I’ve read a book sporting
a gorgeous cover, yet what was within was not up to par. All in all, to make
your book as much of a success as you want it to be, work extremely hard or
harder than you already have, and pay attention to not only one but all aspects
of your book. Do this and you will receive positive feedback. For those who
constantly put down Indie/self-published authors, shame on them. I’ve read
independently published books and believe you me, most of them were better than
books I’ve read by traditionally published authors. It’s a given though that in
both there’s good and bad (ummm, Stevie Wonder – now I’ll be singing this all
day) in the traditionally and self-published world. All you need to do is make yours stand out. Be the best you can be.
Thank you for reading.
Sandra
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Thanks so much for your insightful tips, Sandra! There are so many things to consider when publishing your own books. I've made mistakes myself in publishing, thinking I could have trusted family or friends to do the work of professionals. In the end, sometimes it's better to wait a bit before publishing to make sure you have professional quality when you finally hit publish. I wish more bloggers were as open and honest as Sandra, and I hope writers realize how important bloggers are to our success. Most bloggers don't get paid for what they do. They review, make up dreamy posts and find ways to keep us entertained all because they love reading. I, for one, am grateful for all you bloggers out there. Thanks for taking a chance on Indie authors and for all the time and effort that you spend writing your posts.
It's surprised me to realize how much time and effort can go into a review, and to think people do it because they love books and want to share that with other readers warms my heart. Sending big, fat cyber-hugs to all of you!
Christie
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